What's more refreshing than a glass of Coca Cola on a nice summer day? Nothing really. Throughout the years Coca Cola has been a really big selling product in the United States and other countries. Wounldn't you be tempted to buy something that has a label everywhere? For Coca Cola there is a logo everywhere. On the doors to gas stations, billboards on the highway and even at soccer games. So what's the first thing people are going to want drink, obveiously it's Coca Cola. What I'm trying to prove is that thanks to all the advertisement everywhere even on television Coke has been improving with their selling. Also their quality is also improving like the shape of the two liter bottles or the 1 lter bottles, they're a lot easier to hold and drink out of.
A cool fact about Coca Cola is when it first came out it was known to be a patent medicine for people to take. But later on in the 20th century it was bought by some salesman and made into a soft drink. So back then it was a good thing to come up with coca cola and now it just doesn't do as well and it just is a soft drink for people to have to refresh from something.
Christeena, i think you should certainly expand in some areas. You started off really good, talking about Coca-Cola's success in the marketing field. That's one of the areas i think you should expand on since u went sort of in depth at the begining. like give some specific examples of how this great marketing helped Coke achieve such success, or how important is really marketing to thins company.
ReplyDeleteWhat i also don't like is the ending paragraph. "Some salesman" kind of shows that you didnt really do much effort to look him up. You pretty much generalized to much on it. And also should talk more about it's medicinal uses in its early stages of production at the end of nineteenth century.